步驟與要點(diǎn)如下：

1.確定主題，并在文中說明原因;

2.圍繞主題，進(jìn)行敘述;

3.寫出具體計(jì)劃，也可以講述一段與主題有關(guān)的故事或經(jīng)歷。

要求：

1. 補(bǔ)全標(biāo)題(參考詞匯：better, happier,healthier, stronger等);

2. 字跡工整，內(nèi)容完整連貫，語言準(zhǔn)確規(guī)范;

3. 鼓勵寫出真情實(shí)感，對緊扣主題的適當(dāng)發(fā)揮不予扣分。短文的開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù);

4. 作文中可以寫出具體計(jì)劃內(nèi)容，也可以使用親身經(jīng)歷或虛構(gòu)的故事，但要注意時態(tài)的運(yùn)用;如果參照短文中的內(nèi)容，不可以直接引用短文中的句子;

5. 作文中不要出現(xiàn)考生和相關(guān)人物的真實(shí)校名和姓名。

Good habits make me________

Good habits are important in our lives.They influence us a lot in many ways. I think …

以上題干，Hersey給大家簡單總結(jié)為三要素：標(biāo)題;原因;事例【計(jì)劃、故事、經(jīng)歷三選其一】。當(dāng)然，三要素一定要一致，原因要指向觀點(diǎn)，事例要指向原因+觀點(diǎn)。

接下來，怎樣開始寫呢?我們通常要以三部分來完成寫作。

第一部分，觀點(diǎn)+原因。如I think good habits make me healthier.(觀點(diǎn)) With good habits, I can live a regular life.(原因)

第二部分，也是最重要的部分——事例。本部分是作文的主體部分，事例一定要突出中心，支持自己的觀點(diǎn)成立。首先，三選一，計(jì)劃要用將來時態(tài)進(jìn)行敘述，故事、經(jīng)歷要用過去時態(tài)。個人認(rèn)為經(jīng)歷最好寫，也最有說服力。最簡單的寫法就是Time-Place-Character-Beginning-Middle-Ending，也就是大家熟悉的記敘文六要素了。如：I can still remember the experience of the summer holiday before Ibecame a junior high school student, I had a large amount of free time. I choseto play computer games all day and all night to relax. Sometimes I even forgotto have dinner. At last, I got very sick and went to hospital. The doctor toldme that I must keep good habits such as eating on time and doing exercisesregularly. From then on, I changed my lifestyle. I woke up early and wentjogging every morning; I had every meal regularly, and so on. As a result, Ibecame healthier and healthier.

第三部分，總結(jié)。目的是升華主題，發(fā)出暢想、號召等。如：In my opinion, keeping good habits is the most helpful way to keephealthy. If you want to become healthier, it is high time that you should keepgood habits.

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